It could have been written, "a couple of hours later." While we later find out he's talked to the sister, how did he know that they got the phone when they did? Yeah, it's creative license, but still. Harman gets the phone number right away, as in within a few minutes. A Trac-phone, for example, is prepaid and cheap. Nit picks: You don't need a credit card to get a cell phone.
You're the silver cord that anchors me in the land of the living while my soul spends the day roaming through hell." "Just lemme hold you while the sun comes up. There was some lovely and romantic imagery. But it got better and the last quarter was wonderful. At one point I felt that the only way they knew how to show their love was through sex. I felt the two guys were distant and their love didn't show.
At first I didn't like this one as well as most of the others because it started out weakly. His profile is better because his eyes are ever so slightly too close together, but he is so beautiful.Īnyway, on to the writing.
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